Sonnet
- Devarsh Shah
The question is do you believe in love?
Even though you have to face lot of things,
and those things aren't mentioned above.
It is even better to take the beatings.
Feeling of affection is actually love
and we think it is always positive.
It is not what it means by love,
it is sometimes also negative.
Negative is not something wrong.
It is about give and take.
Even though it is not strong.
We should try not to make it fake.
So as long as we live
we should learn to love.
we should learn to love.
I really like your sonnet, it's just too bad that you dont have the 14th line to complete the couplet. So I suggest that you add a concluding line.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your feedback, I did the changes. Actually, there were two lines in the last stanza but somehow it showed as one.
DeleteThanks again.