The boy that i lost
Remember the day my world fell apart
My big love just left without a good-bye.
The only thing to remember him, art.
Wen he panted, the time just passed by.
Wen he was smiling, he's eyes were shining,
I m really mad, why did he just left? It s sad
I kill hem, I m just a human being.
My dear reader, please don't think i am bad!
The killing? Sarcasm, to understand.
I liked him a lot, he was my boy
And the worst part was in the end
For me, this one guy was more than a toy!
He will always have a place in my heart,
If I m honest, i kept he's lovely art.
-Joanne Ruf
I really like the sonnet, and it pretty much follows the structure, I just suggest that you look over the spelling, so that it's maybe easier to understand.
ReplyDeleteI like your use of apostrophe in the 8th line and your rhetorical question in the 9th.
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