Haikus
-Ambre
Concert
As they cam on stage
The music followed and the
memories begun
Snow
Flakes floating in this
Winter wonderland silence
As the lights twinkle
Hot Chocolate
A cup of coco?
The chocolatey goodness
which wraps me in warmth
I like the way you wrote your first haiku, it reminds me of a concert I went to (probably the one you're talking about) and it almost sounds like a story.
ReplyDeleteI like the way your third haiku truly reminds me of that feeling which you get where the chocolate warmth envelops you. Its a very good haiku because it instantly acts a reminder to one of my own experiences.
ReplyDeleteSonja