Tuesday 12 November 2013

Haiku Verena




1. Black beach shimering
    scent of icense within
    ocean waves near me

2. laying on the beach
    Cocktails drinking at the bar
    having fun with friends

3. Standing in the line
    waiting hours and hours
    seeing an idol
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4 comments:

  1. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 03:03

    I really like your first Kaiku because it cxommunicates the feeling really good, like you are right there.

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  2. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 03:04

    -Caroline W

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  3. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 10:37

    I like your first Haiku as it captures a sense of a very calm atmosphere in so little words. - Shaira

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  4. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 10:38

    I like your second one, it fits perfect to the first one. It really gives a summer feeling.
    Richard

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