Haiku Caroline W
Favourite place :
Stunning juge mountains
The sun shining at your face
Breath fresh,cold,clean air
Favorite memory :
The soft shinny skin
The tingling stomach
Dolphin`s happiness
A crazy memory:
The braun muddy ground
The scared and nervous people
Water everywhere
I like your first poem about your favorite place. Reading it you can imagine the event, the scene, and even a the mood. It is good imagery.
ReplyDeleteJaclyn Parris
I really liked your haiku because it was easy to read and your words choices are excellent
ReplyDeleteCédric Hyafil
I really like the line dolphins happiness, because that gives me the Image of dolphins noise.-Verena
ReplyDeleteAt your first one a can really imagine how it would look like, very good.
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