Richard Matalewski
Love is like the summer time,
Like smelling the fresh air on a winter day,
Love you can feel every time,
Like butterflies in may,
Love can found any where,
it is inside every one,
Love is in the air
you can see it at the smiling sun,
The world is now full with colors,
All make now anymore no sense,
For her you can spend a thousand dollars,
you can’t controls your emotions, escaping makes no sense,
Love is the best thing that can happen to you,
Look in her eyes so wonderful and blue.
Through out the good explaiting of love though the sences, I am able to make my self a visual Picture of love. I really like how you have communicated `love`
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Your use of the sonnet to describe love instead of a question is intriguing and I liked it. You might want to double check that it's 5 meters in each line to truly follow a Shakesperian sonnet. I really enjoyed reading it though and the last two lines are really good because now we know all along you were talking about someone. (or trying to make it rhyme) either way, it's a really good sonnet.
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