Cinqueterre (Chink-qwa-tear-a)
Cinqueterre is
blue sky and bluer ocean
good food and great friends
Shiloh
Dusty gravel road
Breathing in hay and horses
I can't wait to ride
Victory
Wind whipping my hair
Veins filled with adrenaline
Final jump is here
Riley Jones
I really like how you made it very clear that you were riding and ist very easy to Picture.
ReplyDeleteyour second one i like very mush because it really show how mush u want to ride again.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you used alliteration in all of your haikus, i don't know if this was on purpose but I think it makes them flow better and makes them more interesting to read as well. -Ladina
ReplyDeleteI like your last Haiku as it really pictures the moment well even though no direct imagery of the surroundings is used. - Shaira
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