Monday 11 November 2013

Cédric Hyafil


''Winter is coming"
Those three words mean death and pain.
White snow will be here

Champs de Mars

An immense green field.
Under a sapphire sky
Stands an iron peak

The moment is here,
The one I have been waiting
I don't know which one
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4 comments:

  1. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 07:12

    I really like your first haiku, now i know how you feel about winter!
    Also you choice of words is really good.

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  2. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 08:13

    Your Haiku about the Champs de Mars is good. I can picture what you are trying to say.
    Devarsh Shah

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  3. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 10:39

    I love your 'Winter is coming' Haiku because this is one of your catchphrases and it's very interesting to see the meaning behind it. Remember Cedric winter is coming! :) - Shaira

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  4. English Grade 1017 November 2013 at 03:14

    I really like your use of descriptive language in your second haiku I can really imagine what you are describing.
    renua

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