Kai Ohlig
Place:
Top of the mountain
Seeing big business below
But it's so quiet
It's calm and quiet
Wind softly touching my face
Feeling Victory
Memory:
Just had a great week
Why do I have to got back?
The train slowly moves
Sitting in the train
I'm on the hatred way home
It's much too early
I really like this, it's really points out the Haikus, and makes
ReplyDeleteIts really nice, and really shows what a Haiku is.
It is really easy to imagine your memories and your favorite places just by reading this haiku
ReplyDeleteCédric Hyafil
Youre Memory hiakus Shows how everyone feels and I reallylike that.-Verena
ReplyDeleteThe 'place' part is very good. I can picture what you're trying to say.
ReplyDeleteDevarsh Shah