Monday 11 November 2013

Julian Pohl
11.11.13
English A
Ms. klaase
                                                                        Haiku´s

The workplace

 Green wet and muddy Gras
Emotional team members
teamwork to achieve

Teamwork

 Exhausted muscles
thirty seconds left to win
can´t believe, we won

Winter

 Cold windy winter
Playing playstation at home
excitement and joy
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  1. English Grade 1011 November 2013 at 09:37

    The enjambment from win to can't really sounds like the persons thoughts which makes it more real. 'Emotional' really represents the passion the players have. I like how they were all centred around games.

    :) ambre

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