Monday 11 November 2013

By Jaclyn Parris
Attempt at Snowboarding

Rented blue snowboard
Tumbling down the snow trail
Rolling in the cold

Thin Ice

Outside in the snow
Glide across the frozen pond
Crashing through the ice

Tide Pools

Freezing cold water
Current rushing through the pools
Rocks guarding the sea
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  1. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 11:36

    I like the way you write the experience so wholly in the first haiku. The third haiku is my favourite because it is very descriptive. Overall I think your haiku's are fantastically written.

    -Sonja Milekovic

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