I like your first haiku, because you used alliteration and I like you last line "where the sun goes down".-Kimberly Post
It's maybe a bit too simple, but it really shows who you were and how you were raised, and it made you happy.
I like your first haiku, because you used alliteration and I like you last line "where the sun goes down".
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It's maybe a bit too simple, but it really shows who you were and how you were raised, and it made you happy.
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