Tuesday 12 November 2013





Haikus


Secret of Love

Light but fulfilling
On the earth it is,
A wonderful thing



Why can't you hear me ?

It is dark inside
I'm not shining anymore
He's gone, forever


Mine.

This is my own life
In the middle of my war
The time to fly came
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6 comments:

  1. English Grade 1012 November 2013 at 08:07

    I like the secret of love because it seems like a mystery what love actually is.
    Julian Pohl

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  2. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 03:18

    I llike your last Haiku "Mine." because it expresses a lot of teenagers feelings. And I like your second line "In the middleof my war".
    -Kimberly Post

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  3. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 07:16

    I really like the part "why cant you hear me?" its seems so real.
    It really describes the way your feeling!
    -Billie Tyrell

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  4. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 11:25

    I really liked your haikus,the fact that you have decided to choose "dark" theme such as war. I really lied the 3rd one even though I have no idea who you are
    Cédric Hyafil

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  5. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 11:28

    *liked

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  6. English Grade 1014 November 2013 at 01:07

    i really like your secound hiku. About how the lost of someone can make you really sad.
    Leslie

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