Monday 11 November 2013

Shaira Berg Haiku

The great lights sparkle,
The Christmas tree beams to me,
The scent of the year.

I lie on the beach,
The red hot sand burns my hand,
The hottest summer.

The large apple tree,
A memory that was built,
Died within a beat.
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4 comments:

  1. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 03:12

    I really like your last Haiku because your choice of vacabulary in the last sentence is showing a good perspective of how it looks and how ypou feel about it.

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  2. English Grade 1013 November 2013 at 03:15

    I like your first haiku, because of the describtive vocabulary you used in the first line.
    -Kimberly Post

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  3. English Grade 1014 November 2013 at 01:04

    i really like that you used the word sparkel in the first Hiku, because it gives the reader a taste of the atmosphere that had to be there.
    Leslie

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  4. English Grade 1017 November 2013 at 03:15

    I really like the first haiku because of the language you use and the image i can imagine .
    renua

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