I feel as though i will love you to death
I will not give up, i will stand by you
Up until you take your very last breath
Though i hope that is not what it comes to
When the doctor told me the truth i cried
The idea of you gone hurt so bad
When i went to talk to you, you denied
I was hard for me not to be very sad
Life without you would be so very hard
Who will make me laugh, who will make me smile
I will miss our walks down the boulevard
I want what we went through to be worthwhile
Life without you will never be the same
You can live through this that is my main aim
Your sonnet is very good but you may want to reword the 8th line.
ReplyDeleteJaclyn Parris