Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow
by Caroline Werner
Yesterday, so long ago
Where I would always go
Nature which did always love
Sometimes from above
Through the forest I have jumped
So I would have never dumped.
In tennis where I had success
I did never take a guess
The freedom that I miss
And the teddies which me kiss
My brother a walking dictionary
But for me not necessary
Today he`s away
And that`s good
`cause I hate the ways he can say
In a view months he is back
Who will love it is my granddad Jack
The other brother is who I adore
He`s so much fun and much more
I hope the present is fast over
Like I could drive away with a rangerover
Tomorrow will be my time
Full of study, job and travel
there is not ganna be a devil
My home is going to be here and there
all around where?
In Switzerland
and America
Just look at ya`
Marketing or management
That`s my dream
That`s what it meant
Just look at them
The enjambment from he's away to and thats good was flowy and funny. The 'over' and 'range rover' made the phrase less heavy. The use of devil was a good way of representing bad things. I like how you included you childhood and your brothers and also what your really want your future to be.
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You have good poetic devices but your picture is awesome.
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