View
The height of the roof
Makes a difference of the view
the sun sinks down slow
Satisfied
The worm summer sun
makes you satisfied of live
on your soft sun chair
Feeling free
Jump high with a horse
you can fly up to the sky
feel as free then me
- Joanne Ruf
I love the first poem, I do not know what it is but I really like it. Maybe it is the enjambment between the first two lines or the repetition of "of the". Or the alliteration in the last line. I like the other two a lot too. The second one s cool because of the alliteration of the letter s. The last one has some good alliteration, too. They are all very good.
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