Ballad - Freedom - Ruben
Free choice, free life
Think the man as he speaks to his wife
I see no war, no crime
No death by a knife
It has been like this
Since the year 2030
Penalties rose, crimes dropped
Thats when the government became dirty
The streets can be walked
With no worries having a stranger talk
No worries, no fears, no danger
So we just continue to walk
Houses can be left unlocked
Without worries of having an intruder
No Need for extra safety
Its already there, there wont be a murder
honestly i really think your poem is amazing! I like the words you used to represent freedom ! -robin
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