Julian Pohl
11.11.13
English A
Ms. klaase
Haiku´s
The workplace
Green wet and muddy Gras
Emotional team members
teamwork to achieve
Teamwork
Exhausted muscles
thirty seconds left to win
can´t believe, we won
Winter
Cold windy winter
Playing playstation at home
excitement and joy
The enjambment from win to can't really sounds like the persons thoughts which makes it more real. 'Emotional' really represents the passion the players have. I like how they were all centred around games.
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