Alexander Schnadt
English A 10
A.Klasen
7.11.13
I am From
Born in the City
I look always pretty
But I live in the countryside
And I am always polite
On one side my neighbour is a millionaire
And on the other side it is a paddock
The farmer is always sitting in a white chair
And smelling the nasty gray smock
My father collects old cars
The signs are shiny stars
My mum and I play golf
I have never seen a wolf
I lived in New York
But only for 4 years
Because of my dads work
That was very cool
At home I have a nice pool
Which is small but still very cool
For the pool we let built a roof
And all my jackets are wind proofed
i cant really read it. Then i dont see your text, because its to dark color of the poem. :/
ReplyDeletei like your poem but there are not enought poestic devices. You use really good endrhymes but nothing else.
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