Where am I from ?
"Michael Hanselmann." Michael Hanselmann. N.p., n.d. Web. 07 Nov. 2013.
http://www.michaelhanselmann.de/bilder_winter.htm
Sometimes clueless and confused
All I am saying is what why where
That`s how I am used
Acting as a clown right here
Between the mountain
And the forest
Cows drinking out a fountain
While the farmers can`t rest
We have a good mixture
Between the nature
And civilization
That`s our creation
whoohuu
that`s how we do
Education
Is the preparation
So you know
One day you can go
Lausanne, my mother`s home
Is where you roam
Big and sweet
Where you definitely eat
And will come back
Because of the good snack
My brothers are like the weather
One day the sun shines
The other you need a jacket out of leather
or a lot of different wines
to get through the storm
until it becomes warm
I ganna` miss you forever
because we had a nice time together
But now you are in paradise
and I am sure it is so nice
Sometimes life gets hard
It can change you
because it can be a new start
Even though you have no clue
it makes you stronger
because all what is happening
keeps you doin` longer.
I like how you used an otmanopeia in line 13, beacause it shows that you are national proud and that you like your Country.
ReplyDelete-Verena
DeleteI like the way you've selected the rhyming words and also the use of the onomatopoeia is very good.
ReplyDelete-Devarsh Shah