I was born but I don't know were
I m a mix of different nations or
I m one out of four
I m the middle of my sisters
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I lived in four differed places
I am a person out of tow faces
I grow up in the mountains
Next to the farmers
But now I m living in tow different places
In the city and on the country
I m a spaghetti eater
and a weather drinker
I love Christmas with the family
and birthday with friends
-joanne ruf
Los Angeles, File: LA Skyline Mountains2.jpg, Wikipedia
I like the way you started your poem, because it doesn't say where you are from but it gives you an idea.
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I like how you described your siblings, by saying who's older and who is younger.
ReplyDeleteAnd how you contrast the two diffrent places you live and the two diffrent faces you have.
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