The bright street lights shine
While the rain falls and splashed
On the red buses
The tall grey buildings
A single spectrum of light
Sun peaking over
Diving in the sea
The waves dance in the ocean
Wish I could live here
By Renua
The personification of the waves sets a mental image. 'Spectrum' is a good evidence of not only using safe vocal. The content was on locations, all different.
ReplyDelete:) ambre
I like that you spoke about London buses indirectly in the first one and it was clear to people who know of the famous red buses. You spoke of London clearly using the stereotype that it's always raining.
ReplyDeleteYou speak of the experience of being in the water so wholly I can imagine being there myself.
-Sonja