Kai Ohlig
Anna Klasen
English 10
7th Nov. 2013
I
am from Poem
Hi,
my name is Kai
Now
listen closely
`cause
who am I?
I
will tell you slowly
Europe,
that’s where I come from
Germany,
that’s where I belong
Munich,
that’s even closer
However
my mother and father
Rather
come from further north
I
have two annoying relatives
Who
are bittersweet little sisters
They
bite , they fight, they cry
Oh
my, I’d like to fly away
On
the other hand my parents
Who
are always finding
My
mistakes
They’re
so much better
They
don’t fight like children
My
grandparents are very sportive
Even
though they’re old
They
tend to be so active
So
they’d never be to old
I
also have my hobbies
Which
I will not to never forget
To
never forget the tone
Of
my sweet saxophone
To
never forget the feeling
When
looking left and right
Felling
the wind briskly blowing
When
I’m going on my bike
Wong, Nicole. "Community Biking." - Technorati Green. N.p., 11 June 2010. Web. 07 Nov. 2013.
I really like the rhyme of the first stanza- its a great hook, and how you called your sisters bittersweet, I like how you described the wind briskly blowing, I think the way you included germany and your family was good :)
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I like that your telling where you come from step by step. You started in Europe and ended near by munich.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Your description of riding the bike was really good. It was extremely well written and the words flow well together.
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