English 10
Ms. Klasen
7.11.13
I am from Poem
I am from the land
This is where I was born
I have the whole world in my hands
I have blown the horn
I'm jolly and I'm depressed
I'm lazy and I'm ambitious
I was a child but I have aged
I have become more mature
I work hard to win what I want
And I wont stop until I get what I want
I am like a ghost fading arround live
To eventually find the so wanted wife
The sport is what I adore
The sport is what keeps me fit
The sport gives me energy to overachieve
The sport is the tone beating in my hearth
I spend time with two
If I can't, I will choose you
I am scared of the dark
So guide me the way with your spark
Cauffet, François. "Pronostic Finale Ligue Des Champions : Bayern Munich – Borussia Dortmund." Wallabet. N.p., 25 May 2013. Web. 07 Nov. 2013. <http://wallabet.fr/pronostic-ligue-des-champions-bayern-dortmund/>.
It is good that you repeated "the sport" for a whole stanza, it really emphasizes how passionate you are about it and how important it is in your life. And the picture also helps to stress your love of soccer. Therefore it all is really well written and displayed.
ReplyDeleteJaclyn Parrs
The rhyming of your poem is really good and consistent. I think the third stanza is my favourite because you're talking about what you want out of life and about your basic personal traits.
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